KailiA Chase Scene Critique

In this video we made a chase scene where a girl gets chased outside and meets her end. The video was good in my opinion but could have been improved. One way it could have been improved would be if we had more close ups and more medium shots. It could also be improved by adding another scene at the end, so the end would be more interesting. Other than that I feel like the video was pretty good. We used Final Cut Pro to edit our videos and filmed using Ipads.